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Psalm 12:6 6 The words of the LORD are pure words; As silver tried in a furnace on the earth, refined seven times.

We have finished the first rough draft of The Love of God Workbook. This is very rough. Shira and Katie worked very hard. Shira's initial critique and complementary writing was very helpful, indeed. Either over the next day or the next week we'll be sending it to some friends for their perusal and brutal help. I wrote a poem to Carl, asking for help...

A Formal Invitation To Review A Manuscript
By David Harwood
Are you prepared to slog
Through my writing on God
And changes to propose
Redundancies expose?
To help me, as I'd help you?
To rejoice - or say, "Ewwww...
“You call that good thought?
“I say it is not!"
To comment
And foment
With antagonism
To help me in writing
This prose syllogism?
Will you be ruthless
If it is truthless?
And see as to whether
There’s truth or there’s error?
If so, then read on
If not, say, “Be gone.”